The storm was still more than twelve hours out
but the woods hung still and silent.
There was no rustling of leaves
and the birds were voiceless.
Yet I could still hear
in my left ear
mosquito’s
whispered
buzz.
The storm was still more than twelve hours out
but the woods hung still and silent.
There was no rustling of leaves
and the birds were voiceless.
Yet I could still hear
in my left ear
mosquito’s
whispered
buzz.
Polonius got that one right...
Ponderings to Keep
Reflections on my life as a teacher, reader, writer.
Polonius got that one right...
Polonius got that one right...
Polonius got that one right...
Blogging my way through the year
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Polonius got that one right...
shouting my heart out for all who may listen
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Lit On Fire!
"It would be nice if you could just ravel out into time."
Polonius got that one right...
I was having a similar experience this morning as a spring snow storm rolled in. There were no mosquitos, but the dark-eyed Juncos were the only birds around.
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“The calm before the storm” is such a cliche, but its sticking power comes from its reality. It really is a neat experience.
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“voiceless birds”
You certainly have to wonder what is up when you don’t hear the birds singing. Your poem really spoke to the quiet before a big storm. I could feel the silence.
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It is an unsettling experience. The silent woods is a beautiful thing, but strange. I’m glad I was able to convey that. Thanks for reading!
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All it takes is that. One. Mosquito.
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Also – this piece reminds me of the prologue to Natalie Babbitt’s “Tuck Everlasting.” Have you read that book?
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If I have, it’s been years. I’ll have to visit / revisit it soon!
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Buzz
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